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No.L Admin
Posts : 483 Pokepoints : 564 Join date : 2010-05-03 Location : Kagutsuchi
| Subject: Re: No.L's Notebook Fri May 21, 2010 1:27 am | |
| 1st - I was just thinking about when it rained. Usually, people try not to get wet, so they "scatter". The bullets symbolize how rain falls =P And I was thinking of how I appreciate the rain, so I'm getting soaked because I want to enjoy it (if that makes sense ^^ 2nd - Since it's going to be summer soon, I thought I'd write about it. Also, the cicadas buzz really loudly (all the time @_@) so I put that in there. I was remembering the time where me and my friend sat outside talking. and since I live in the desert, we were thirsty, so....yeah xD 3rd - A staring contest at school (or lunch, home, etc.) | |
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Emmsey Squire Up and Coming Trainer
Posts : 575 Pokepoints : 630 Join date : 2010-05-03 Location : rhode island
| Subject: Re: No.L's Notebook Fri May 21, 2010 1:35 am | |
| oh. Okay....then in that case you did a great job! | |
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destiny_deoxys Admin
Posts : 659 Pokepoints : 775 Join date : 2010-05-01 Location : goldenrod
| Subject: Re: No.L's Notebook Fri May 21, 2010 5:20 am | |
| yep you did a great job ^^ | |
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No.L Admin
Posts : 483 Pokepoints : 564 Join date : 2010-05-03 Location : Kagutsuchi
| Subject: Re: No.L's Notebook Wed Aug 11, 2010 1:10 am | |
| I hate strongly dislike writer's block Here's something I typed up a few minutes ago: Carnival The Carnival's here, In the summer sun, Children cheer, Cause it's time for fun! No more homework, No more learning, Time's a wastin' Hurry up let's go! Up and down, Side to side, Don't you frown Enjoy this ride! The moon is in the air, Sadly, so soon, Grabbing my bear, I sing a tune. Driving away, Lights in the distance, The Carnival stands, A lonely beacon. (Inspired from the best movie this Summer: Despicable Me ) | |
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~PokemonMaster~ Admin
Posts : 652 Pokepoints : 855 Join date : 2010-05-04 Location : Everywhere, no power can contain me
| Subject: Re: No.L's Notebook Thu Aug 12, 2010 1:07 am | |
| its pretty cool, but would it be possible for you to get multi-syllable rhymes in there? itd make it better | |
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No.L Admin
Posts : 483 Pokepoints : 564 Join date : 2010-05-03 Location : Kagutsuchi
| Subject: Re: No.L's Notebook Thu Aug 12, 2010 7:11 am | |
| I could try What format are you thinking of, if I may ask? A B C D or A A B B C C D D Stuff like this? | |
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~PokemonMaster~ Admin
Posts : 652 Pokepoints : 855 Join date : 2010-05-04 Location : Everywhere, no power can contain me
| Subject: Re: No.L's Notebook Thu Aug 12, 2010 9:29 am | |
| uuuhm, no, i dont think so i just mean multi syllable rhymes, such as:
"It's torturous/ You must, be a sorceress" "My pen and paper cause a chain reaction/ To get your brain relaxin/ A zany acting maniac in action/ A brainiac/ in fact son, you mainly lack attraction"
See what I mean? A lot of those are several syllables, or several words come together to form a chain of rhymes. Those are all by Eminem by the way | |
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No.L Admin
Posts : 483 Pokepoints : 564 Join date : 2010-05-03 Location : Kagutsuchi
| Subject: Re: No.L's Notebook Thu Aug 12, 2010 9:35 am | |
| So, kinda like a lyrical poem? | |
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~PokemonMaster~ Admin
Posts : 652 Pokepoints : 855 Join date : 2010-05-04 Location : Everywhere, no power can contain me
| Subject: Re: No.L's Notebook Thu Aug 12, 2010 10:03 am | |
| well, sure but i mean, u can still do ur A, B, C, D dealio, but make ur rhymes more complex i dunno, i just think itd be cool | |
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No.L Admin
Posts : 483 Pokepoints : 564 Join date : 2010-05-03 Location : Kagutsuchi
| Subject: Re: No.L's Notebook Thu Aug 12, 2010 7:16 pm | |
| Haha, ok then When I first started writing it, it was turning into a lyrical poem - but I changed it for some reason I'll edit it sometime soon - thanks for the input! | |
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~PokemonMaster~ Admin
Posts : 652 Pokepoints : 855 Join date : 2010-05-04 Location : Everywhere, no power can contain me
| Subject: Re: No.L's Notebook Thu Aug 12, 2010 8:40 pm | |
| no problem! i didnt realize there is a name for that. i suppose i like lyrical poems a lot more. they seem much more complex. i feel anyone could make a poem, but not everyone can make a good lyrical poem | |
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